The keenly anticipated Meryton ball is referred to by the Bennets as the 'next assembly'
- in Georgian times, public balls were held, usually to coincide with
a full moon to aid travel to and fro, in the Autumn and Winter months. They were important
social gatherings, allowing young people from a wider social circle than usual to
meet
and get to know one another. This ball offers the novelty of Mr Bingley and his 'large
party' from Netherfield being introduced to Meryton society.
The narrative voice comes close to the voice of gossip in Meryton about marriage
market - with the idea that 'to be fond of dancing' was a step to 'falling in love'.
This sense of anticipation is translated in the Davies' 1995 adaptation by Mrs Bennet's
remark that, now Mr Bennet has called on him, her 'girls' will 'all dance with Mr
Bingley'.
The gap between rumour and reality is portrayed by Austen - town gossip exaggerates
the size of the party to include 'twelve ladies' who might form a barrier to
the young women of Meryton dancing with Mr Bingley - but in reality, only his two
sisters attend with him. The town gossip about Bingley and his guests is represented
in Davies'
adaptation in a lively two-hander between Lydia and Kitty.
When the Bingley party arrives at the ball, Elizabeth notes to her sisters and Charlotte
-
'only two ladies then after all'.
Unlike Austen, Davies provides detailed directions about the people present and setting
for the ball - including how they feel in their finery; that Mrs Bennet and Lady Lucas
are at
'the top end of the social scale here'. This explains further why they are offended
when, as Austen notes, Mr Darcy seems 'so above his company'
Davies visualises the assembly room where dancing, refreshment and talk all take place.
He also envisages the atmosphere which is 'hot and sweaty', full of
'coarse male laughter' and 'ROWS of plump matrons sitting down'. People are relaxed
enjoying themselves.
The onscreen production is
slightly more refined than this and these directions in fact describe more accurately
the setting and atmosphere of the Meryton Ball in the 2005 Joe Wright adaptation,
which is a larger more chaotic
gathering. The music stops and a hush falls upon proceedings when the Netherfield
party arrives and walks the full length of the room with the whole assembly watching
them.
In the novel, first favourable impressions of Darcy from the assembly are of his
'handsome features, noble mein' and his 'ten thousand a year' (which would have made
his family one of the richest 400 in the country at the time [Mingay, 1963]). But
soon 'his manners gave a disgust' as he refuses to engage with the Meryton residents.
Davies channels
these first impressions through Mrs Bennet who asks Jane and Elizabeth if Darcy is
not 'the handsomest man you have ever seen'. But when he snubs them, walking off after
he claims he 'rarely dances',
Mrs Bennet asks if they have ever met 'such a proud disagreeable man' and agrees with
Elizabeth's teasing that he is 'Quite ill-favoured!' Darcy has signalled to her clearly
that he is not in
the market for 'falling in love' at this ball. There is no such conversation in the
novel and Darcy does dance but only once with each of Bingley's sisters.
Note from the Davies stage directions how Bingley dances respectfully with Jane and
other Meryton ladies, while Darcy 'prowls the room', observing all, inlcuding the
gossiping
Mrs Bennet, failing to spot when Sir William approaches to him to speak and ending
up 'a little to one side'.
Elizabeth is 'sitting down just behind' Darcy when Bingley urges him to dance, making
it more plausible that he does not think she will overhear. Instead, in the 1995 adaptation
the camera frames
Elizabeth in the foreground and then to the side of the two men where she is more
obvious to them. This increases the force of his slight to her.
Davies retains Darcy and Bingley's conversation almost verbatim: Bingley declares
that Jane is the 'most beautiful creature I ever beheld' while appropriately the music
playing is the country
dance tune 'The Happy Captive'. Darcy states that being unable to dance with Miss
Bingley or Mrs Hurst 'it would be a punishment for me to stand up with any other woman
in the room', which is close to
Austen's dialogue. Davies claims in his stage directions that in his very strong words
'there's an undercurrent of humour to it which is not unconscious on Darcy's part',
i.e. this is men's banter, but
it does not play out that way on screen.
After Darcy slights Elizabeth saying she is 'tolerable' but 'not handsome enough
to tempt me' and has already been rejected by 'other men', Davies' adaptation stages
it so that Elizabeth
crosses in front of him to reach Charlotte: 'This means she has to pass DARCY' who
thinks 'actually she is rather interesting'...laying the first foundation here for
his attraction to her, which the novel does not.
In the 2005 adaptation, the Bennet family have already been introduced to the Bingley
party and Elizabeth has asked Darcy if he likes to dance to which replies with the
colloquial
‘Not if I can help it’. She is in a quiet spot with Charlotte, hidden from view, when
they overhear ‘not handsome enough to tempt me’ line. This adaptation spares Elizabeth
the ‘slighted by other men’ comment.
Austen has Elizabeth relate the story of Darcy's rejection 'with great spirit among
her friends' because her 'lively playful disposition... delighted in any thing ridiculous'.
Davies does not
openly relay what Elizabeth says to Charlotte either but her reaction and looks exchanged
between them and Darcy say it all.
In the 2005 adaptation, Elizabeth seizes the right of reply to Darcy’s insult in
a group exchange
about what encourages affection. She responds to Darcy ‘Dancing… even if one’s partner
is barely tolerable’ and then exits the assembly.
This sets up their combative relationship earlier than either the novel or the 1995
adaptation do.
In the novel,the most detail about the dances themselves is offered by Mrs Bennet
to her husband on returning from the ball. She recounts who danced with with whom
for each two-dance sets. Dances of the
long-form type often lasted 20 minutes each, meaning partners were able to spend 40
minutes in each other's company across the set.
Elsewhere, Jane Austen describes dancing as quite a shared physical experience
[add quote].
While 'Jane was so admired' Mrs Bennet relates 'with much bitterness of spirit and
some exaggeration' Darcy's slight to Elizabeth and claims she is not so badly off
'by not suiting his fancy'.
Davies plays up the banter between Mr and Mrs Bennet even further than Austen and
engages Mr Bennet's playful indignance: 'Slighted my Lizzy, did he?' But the screenwriter
gives the last word to Elizabeth who
'safely' promises 'never to dance with Mr. Darcy!' A promise that will be broken at
Netherfield Ball.
Austen plunges the reader straight into Elizabeth's experience of the Netherfield
Ball at the start of Chapter 18. She is looking around the crowded drawing room, trying
to locate Wickham. After Denny
explains his absence, she is furious and barely able to control her feelings when
Darcy comes to ask how she is. 'Attention, forbearance, patience with Darcy, was injury
to Wickham' and 'turned away with a degree of ill-humour.'
This first encounter is replaced in the 1995 adaptation by a series of intense looks
between Darcy and Elizabeth across the room. However, the scene-setting for the ball
is grander than for the public assembly at Meryton - with
guests being met formally by the Bingleys and the reception, dancing and dining taking
place across several decorated rooms.
The band is also much larger and the music more refined. Davies' stage directions
describe the ball room
as 'glittering, elegant, very formal... Beautiful room, tall windows, chandeliers,
lots of ELEGANT PEOPLE'.
The setting for the 2005 adaptation is even grander
and the camera follows Elizabeth through the rooms, gazing around in wonder.
The comic juxtaposition of Elizabeth's dance with Mr Collins and her stately dance
with Darcy is heightened in the 1995 adaptation. Austen describes her 'dances of mortification'
with her cousin. In Davies' adaptation the lively leaping dance
that accompanies 'The Shrewsbury Lasses' tune allows for Mr Collins ridiculous jumps
and mistakes with the dance steps. The 2005 film has Mr Collins staring overintently
into Elizabeth's eyes while she catches up on news of Wickham from her
friends in moments when the dance parts her from Mr Collins. This is the Boulanger
which is the C18thC equivalent of speed-dating dance.
In contrast, Austen underlines the fact that once Elizabeth has got over her own shock
of accepting Darcy's spontaneous invitation to dance she notices 'the dignity to which
she was arrived' in standing up with him in
the eyes of the company. Davies notes that Darcy and Elizabeth 'dance very well together'
and the dignified, 'Wildboar [Mr Beveridge's] Maggot' allows for the 'superior dancing'
that Sir William openly praises them for. The pauses
caused by Elizabeth and Darcy being separated during the dance add to the tension
and drama of their conversation.
The complexity of the choreography makes it all the more impressive that the actors
only
had three days to master this and all the other dances in the series [choreographer,
Jane Gibson, in The Making of Pride and Prejudice].
The tone of the conversation that Elizabeth starts is lighter at first in the 1995
adaptation but, in the novel, the verbs and adverbs used to describe her tone and
attitude show she views it as 'a greater punishment to her
partner to oblige him to talk'. Phrases like 'Archly', 'unable to resist the temptation'
and 'replied with emphasis' indicate she is trying to irritate Darcy in revenge for
his ill-treatment of Wickham. Darcy's 'Do you talk by the rule when dancing?'
seems light in repsonse to what sound like teasing comments. Both adaptations retain
this glittering dialogue but omit other small talk, for example about 'private balls
being much pleasnter than public ones.'
This comment is restored in their dialogue
in the 2005 film, although Elizabeth starts the whole conversation more informally
with 'I love this dance', which is accompanied by a soulful theme from Purcell's opera
Dido and Aeneas: serious music heralding a grown-up relationship
between them.
Once Mr Darcy asks Elizabeth if she and her sisters often walk to Meryton, the conversation
turns darker. It allows her to introduce the topic of Wickham and he tries to explain
that Wickham does not often keep friends.
Austen interrupts the
dance with Sir William's comments about a future happy event between Jane and Bingley
and Darcy's eyes 'are directed with a very serious expression towards Bingley and
Jane'. When the dance resumes, he attempts to discover her reading tastes - always
a good sign in
a male character in Austen - but she moves back to his character and how once a resentment
is formed he rarely forgives. Darcy requests her to delay judgement him for the present
- not to hold on to hasty first impressions. The signals he sends are
retained in the Davies' adapation and the two part as the dance ends. One stage direction
sums up the tone he forsees Elizabeth taking, however: 'ELIZABETH, playfulness masking
aggression'. The 2005 adaptation moves further away from Austen to create
one of the most memorable scenes of the whole film. The dance is intense, full of
longing looks and miscommunication. It ends not with Darcy's request to Elizabeth
but with his pledge to 'afford [her] more clarity in the future' about his character.
The two
have stopped dancing while other dancers move around them and when they resume are
alone in the ballroom - immersed in one another's movements and gazes - until the
music stops. The effect is that of a couple falling in love in spite of themselves.
Immediately after her dance with Darcy, Austen issues Elizabeth and the reader with
two warnings about Wickham - one venomous one from Caroline Bingley who insists that
Wickham 'has treated Mr Darcy in an infamous manner'. Ironically, this is intended
to hurt Elizabeth, this information could do Elizabeth a favour. 'Insolent girl!'
she responds, labelling it as a 'paltry attack'. The second warning comes from indirectly
from Mr Bingley via Jane. Elizabeth may feel that Jane's views are influenced by her
feelings
for Bingley, but in fact it is she who is biased due to her prejudice against Darcy.
The 1995 adaptation depicts both these warnings and Elizabeth acknowledges 'Mr Bingley's
sincerity' in believing his friend.
The 2005 adaptation however, replaces the Miss Bingley
warning with a snide comment - 'What interesting relatives you have, Miss Elizabeth'
as Mr Collins introduces himself to Darcy. It does not inlcude the warning from Jane
at all and so for Elizabeth and the viewer there is much less foreshadowing of Wickham
shady nature in Joe Wright's film.
At the end of Chapter 18 the narrator remarks that to Elizabeth it seems 'that had
her family made an agreement to expose themselves as much as they could during the
evening, it would have been impossible for them to play their parts with more spirit
or finer success'. Reflecting on the middle and end parts of the Netherfield Ball,
this refers not only to the humiliation of Mr Collins before Darcy but also her mother's
loud comments on Jane's match with Bingley. Lizzy's with Mr Collins and this throwing
her younger
daughters 'in the way of other rich men' but also Mary's embarrassing song at the
piano and her father's public admonishment of her.
Whereas, Elizabeth is stuck at the dinner table, listening to her mother's boasts
of her daughter's conquests and their family's luck,
in Davies' adaptation she overhears from some distance and when Bingley shouts 'Shall
we not have some music?
I have a great desire for a song. Caroline!' watches Mary rush up the piano. After
her father
puts a stop to this before she starts a second song, Elizabeth's shame is complete.
This memory comes back to haunt her, in Chapter 34 when Darcy mentions her family's
awful behaviour as factor that have prevented his proposing before.
The 2005 adaptation is much freer
with the events of the ball after the Darcy-Elizabeth dance. The camera roves around
folowing first Elizabeth who witnesses Mary's humiliation, then glimpsing Darcy as
he overhears Mrs Bennet's boast, then Jane and Bingley as they talk about riding and
finally Mr Collins
who is sadly picking the petals off a single flower', and finally back to Elizabeth
– alone outside and full of shame. This neatly condenses the events of the latter
stages of Austen's ball into a short space of time.
The Davies adaptation of Netherfield ball ends with the wild dancing of Lydia through
the dining room, after which she throws herself down a chair and shouts how 'fagged'
she is.
Austen describes how by outstaying their welcome and being the last to
leave the ball, by Mrs Bennet's design, they had 'time to see how heartily they were
wished away by some of the [Bingley] family'. The 2005 adaptation has a scene dedicated
to the Bennets' departure in the light of a grey dawn. Mrs Bennet declares she has
'never had such a wonderful
time' as the camera pans up to the balcony and Caroline says 'You cannot be serious,
Charles.' It sounds a note of reality and is a far cry from the glittering romantic
start to the evening when carriages bringing town and country arrived at Netherfield.
With Elizabeth's response to her aunt's letter the reader is drawn close to her mixed
emotions, as she fathoms what Darcy's actions
in funding and arranging Lydia's marriage to Wickham might mean to her relationship
with him. She is deep in thought. In Davies' 1995 adaptation this
is presented as the image of Darcy and her uncle shaking hands fades and Elizabeth
has only a moment to reflect before Wickham arrives.
In the 2005 film,
Elizabeth hears of Darcy's involvement from Lydia at the dining table. At this point
Wickham shoots her an unnerved glance causing him to drop his plate. It is only
as he pauses to nod goodbye to her and she turns away, that he will know her full
disapproval. A whole dialogue from the novel is expressed solely by a series of looks.
The settings between the novel and the 1995 adaptation contrast strongly here - at
the start of Chapter 52, Elizabeth is in 'the little copse'
reading the letter. In Davies' script she is in the garden much closer to the house.
She is somewhat ambushed by Wickham in the novel, barely having time to
get up from her seat, and with no chance of avoiding him. On screen in the 1995 production,
Wickham is posing against a wall when he interrupts her reading.
Elizabeth's reply about being interrupted show the power that a Jane Austen speech
can wield in one word. In this case the word 'must'. She
enables her heroine to show that she is irritated by his interruption but that he
could prove to her that it might have been worth it. Austen could have chosen 'is'
or 'will be' but instead selects the stronger 'must' with its implication of duty
and obligation. Andrew Davies' stage direction gives a strong sense of how
this line will be delivered.
The Davies'script indicates that they stroll in the garden along the path by the
house, while in the novel, Wickham joins Elizabeth and the two walk
with more privacy in the copse. But Davies' earlier draft indicates that Wickham has
plans to lead Elizabeth into the wilderness garden but she steers him to the well-trodden
more public path.
In the novel, Wickham starts his gentle enquiries about Elizabeth's visit to Pemberley
with talk of the housekeeper there. This first part of the
conversation from the novel appears in Davies' earlier draft
. This may have been cut during shooting to keep the action moving,
because it repeat some of Wickham's complaints of his ill-treatment from an earlier
conversation or during the editing to keep Episode 6 to the right length.
When Wickham refers to 'passing' Darcy in London a few times, Elizabeth and the reader
already know that these were no chance meetings and
therefore that he is lying to her face. In Davies' script this is the first thing
he says to her about Darcy and Pemberley which sharpens the insult. Or is he testing
her out to see what she knows?
If Wickham is testing Elizabeth about what she knows, her response does exactly the
same to him. By first suggesting that Darcy might be in town due to a
wedding, and only clarifying after a pause that she means his wedding to Miss de Bourgh,
she unsettles Wickham. In the Davies' production, his facial expression says "how
true, if only
she knew". The actors' performances highlight the inferences present in the dialogue
much of which is Jane Austen's.
Their veiled argument steps up once Elizabeth and Wickham start to talk about Georgiana
Darcy, whom she introduces into the conversation. When Wickham, at
the height of his hypocrisy, says he hopes Georgiana will turn out well, Elizabeth
fires a more serious warning shot: 'she has got over the most trying age'. In Darcy's
young
sister's case it was Wickham who nearly caused her downfall. Davies' stage direction
is explicit in showing how this comment unnerves Wickham who on-screen half stops
in his
tracks before changing the subject rapidly.
Elizabeth's playful-sounding question to Wickham about making sermons is, as Davies'
stage direction states, full of 'obvious irony'. In the novel
Wickham defends himself saying how the parson's life would have suited him. In Davies'
script this is shrunk to a slightly cross look and 'Exceedingly well'.
The hammer-blow response that reveals to Wickham that she knows exactly what he is,
comes in the novel when she refers to hearing from 'an authority' as good as Darcy
that Wickham turned down the parish promised to him in favour or a payout. Without
revealing her sources, but showing which side of the story she believes, in the Davies
script she reduces Wickham
to a mere 'Well' in response as he submits.
Elizabeth acknowledges her victory by putting an end to this 'quarrel' and offering
him her hand. As long as he knows where she stands, they can move on
as 'brother and sister'. Neither the Wickham of the novel nor the on-screen Wickham
can meet her gaze. And in both the novel and Davies' script Elisabeth has walked them
back
to the house and she leads the way in.
Austen introduces Chapter 53 with confirmation that Elizabeth has silenced Wickham
and this effectively
marks the end of his character arc.
In the 2005 film, as Lydia and Wickham depart from Longbourn, without a word having
passed between Elizabeth
and Wickham. His last act is to pull Lydia down to sit in the carriage and stop her
loud goodbyes to her family. An ominous sign.
There is strong contrast in the arrival of Lady Catherine at Longbourn between the
two adaptations. In Davies' 1995
adaptation it is the remaining Bennet women (including Jane) who receive her in the
daytime. Whereas in the
Joe Wright adaptation, Lady Catherine arrives at night and the whole household greet
her at the door, including Mr Bennet and the dogs.
The effects of these choices of setting the scene are very different: Davies matches
the novel
with the move to the outdoors for the debate that follows between Elizabeth and Lady
Catherine
which is less cloying and claustrophobic
than the candlelit interior scenes of the 2005 film
.
The brusqueness of Lady Catherine’s arrival and entrance in the Bennet’s sitting
room is matched by the conciseness of
Austen’s sentence structure. The brusqueness of her actions will soon be reflected
in her dialogue with Elizabeth. Andrew Davies captures this abrupt quality
in Lady C’s opening lines and then adds an extra note of rudeness as she twice cuts
off Mrs Bennet's comments mid-sentence.
Jane Austen expresses Elizabeth’s thought to herself as ‘she said’ – but it is clear
that this is the character’s internal
monologue In other parts of the novel internal dialogue is expressed by Austen as
'thought Elizabeth'.
or said to herself
Lady Catherine’s opening sentences are jabs at Elizabeth with the repeated use of
‘You cannot’…’your own heart… your own
conscience’ making it clear that Elizabeth is in the wrong about something and she
has put her ‘noble guest’ to much trouble in travelling to Longbourn.
Lady Catherine is to use this rhetorical device of anaphora repeatedly in her argument
with Elizabeth.
. The fact that this is to be a verbal duel is signified in the Davies’ adaptation
when she turns abruptly to face Elizabeth some 10 paces
away as soon as they enter the walled garden and have some privacy.
In contrast to the assertive statements from Lady Catherine, Elizabeth uses conditional
sentences based on hypotheticals to
deflect her opponent’s claims. Here ‘If you believed it to be impossible… I wonder
you took the trouble of coming…’ Her evasion is like a parry to Lady
Catherine’s lunge forward with a sword. This device is called a rhetorical conditional
and is used several times.
Andrew Davies retains these, recogising
them as a key part of Elizabeth's verbal arsenal
.
Throwing her own words back in her face is another ploy that Elizabeth uses to strike
back at Lady Catherine’s rudeness.
Here – she returns the word ‘frankness’ that Lady Catherine has claimed is one of
her strong points with the implication that frankness is only another
word for extreme offensiveness – something Elizabeth does not herself possess. She
manages to operate within the politeness code and use this as a reason
for not denying the rumour about her and Darcy. As part of making the dialogue shorter
for the screen, Davies chooses to omit this detail - her ladyship
neither claims to be frank nor does Elizabeth have this as ammunition to fire back
at her.
Lady Catherine introduces the tale of how she and Darcy’s mother decided long ago
that he and Miss de Bourgh would be married.
In rhetorical terms she is using an anecdote to support her claim that Elizabeth should
reject any claim she has on Darcy. The stage directions in Andrew
Davies'script show Lady Catherine's change of mood as she first hesitates to use such
a personal story and then grows angrier with Elizabeth as she tells it
.
The point of Elizabeth’s lower social class is emphasised by another forceful language
device – the power of three – when she
tells her she is ‘of inferior birth, of no importance in the world and wholly unallied
to the family’ In rhetoric, this is called a tricolon. Davies changes
the emotive power of three to 'without family, connections of fortune' to take away
the stigma of Elizabeth being condsidered 'unimportant' which might have
clashed with the ideas of viewers of the 1990s and replaces it with a the money-related
term 'fortune'
.
The fact that Elizabeth remains logical is supported by her use of balanced sentences
with equally weighted halves.
This device of parataxis is present in many speeches by Jane Austen’s witty heroines
and here makes it sound like she is laying out a case in a court of law. Davies
uses one of the more direct examples of parataxis when Elizabeth seeks to impress
on Lady Catherine that she is Darcy's equal.
Elizabeth acknowledges this is a verbal battle by pointing out to Lady Catherine
that her arguments have been frivolous and
that in making them she has been ill-judged. By commenting on the standard of argument
she attacks the argument rather than the person directly but
still criticises Lady Catherine’s skills and judgement.
Elizabeth finally loses her cool after Lady Catherine resorts to insulting her family
(just as she does when Darcy does this
during his first proposal)
. She speaks her response ‘resentfully’ and tries to bring the conversation to an
abrupt close.
It is Elizabeth who rises first and takes the initiative to act. The Davies adaptation
takes this further with Lady Catherine
out of breath and hurrying to keep up with Elizabeth as she makes off to the house
from the walled garden.
In a final appeal to the code of manners, Lady Catherine asks if Elizabeth will not
reject any claims on Darcy for ‘duty, honour and
gratitude’ and another emotive power of three. In response, Elizabeth flings the same
three words back at her adversary. She is not
beholden to Lady Catherine and has received no offer and so can deflect these terms.
Elizabeth's response in Davies' script does not react to Catherine's attempt
at moral blackmail, but returns another balanced argument to her. Essentially, this
matter is between herself and Darcy and no-one else.
Mrs Bennet’s half-question, wondering if Lady Catherine ‘had nothing special to say
to you’ is deflected by Elizabeth, the narrator
ephemistically comments with a ‘little falsehood’ to protect herself and to avoid
explanation to her mother. The 2005 dialogue echoes the response of a teenager
as Elizabeth storms upstairs shouting ‘Won’t you ever leave me alone!’